Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Hi Room 5 Guess where I am.

Hello everyone
I'm having a great time flitting around everywhere. I've seen dolphins, whales and funny looking things with long claws but they don't have wings like me. I think they live in the water and they have a funny tail. They also have long pointy things coming off their heads - they don't look very friendly.
I have also been having a visit with some other birds. They tell me they are the Southern Falcons. Man they are cool. They chase little birds, if they catch the birds they'll eat them. I didn't think that was quite right. I thought they were just telling big stories like we sometimes did in Room 5 to make things more exciting - but I watched them Yuck.
I liked where they lived though because there were lots of little green juicy things hanging off some plants - they were yummy.
I got growled at though from the falcon for eating them so I thought it was time I moved to another place and thats when I found this really big orange thing sitting on a building. It was enormous and it had the long things coming out of its head and it had a long tail that ended with a square shape. It doesn't have feathers so it can't be a bird.
I heard some people talking and I remember one of the words because its one Whaea Jeanne used sometimes. It was kai. So I don't know if that will help you work out where I have been.

Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Kataeya

Great fairytale Kataeya! I want to know what type of spell the witch put on the baby? And why did she do that? Is it a nice spell, or nasty?

Allure

I really liked the way that you had a problem in your story and a solution - you discovered who had been sending your presents to you. Why was your Dad in the forest?

Hello From Australia

Hi Allure,

My name is Mrs Ersch. I am a teacher from Melbourne, Australia. I teach Grade Preps.
I read your "Deep Down I Knew ..." story and thought it was great. I liked the way you used dark print to make it interesting for the reader.
Keep up the good work.
From, Mrs Ersch

Sarah-Jane

Wow, what neat birthday presents. Am looking forward to hearing more about what adventures your pony and tamagochi are about to have.

Oliver

Wow Oliver, you knew you were a rock star deep down. That is awsome I have always wanted to know a real rock star. It took me a little while to read your story... maybe a different font will make it easier for all your fans to follow your success. I can't wait to find out about the instruments you play and the places you have preformed.


Look forward to reading your story

#1 Fan

Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Haley

Haley I have just found out where you go every Friday night!!!! I am just imagining you dressed in buffy clothes and jazzing it up on the moon. What a great imagination. I cant wait to read about your next adventure.
love Mum

Feedback

Wow Room 5 Kea you have been so busy. DEEP DOWN I KNEW you would write some more amazing stories!!!!!